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I think this will get front page, its funny and for once its without the use of curse words. I like how he just pushed over the table at the end. It was simple but it was one of those things where it was just perfectly so, good job

i liked it

It kinda has a fantasy feel to it, i keep picturing a man trying to figure something out when i hear it, i am kinda new at the music making stuff so i do not have any constructive to tell you sorry .

Hmmmm

it starts good then just when it started turning bad you would add stuff that would make it good agin, and this repeats so i think if u make a few sections shorter it would sound a little better, but overall i liked it, note- it sounds better and better the more i hear it repeated