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I think this will get front page, its funny and for once its without the use of curse words. I like how he just pushed over the table at the end. It was simple but it was one of those things where it was just perfectly so, good job
Good thing you didn't click on the easter egg. :)
You need to work on your pivot skills, try sending it into windows movie maker to add music or sound, take more time to smooth it out and use less complex objects. and pivots are kinda hated on newgrounds so it would be better to post it on a more pivot friendly site, or make your pivot look like a flash
actually for pivot this is relaly good. and it DID have sound. When i converted it to .swf if went away.
i liked it
It kinda has a fantasy feel to it, i keep picturing a man trying to figure something out when i hear it, i am kinda new at the music making stuff so i do not have any constructive to tell you sorry .
i think this will rise to the top of the list in no time, it flows smoothly and i can find anything wrong with it i give you a 10\10 spectacular job
THANK YOU MAN!!!!!
it starts good then just when it started turning bad you would add stuff that would make it good agin, and this repeats so i think if u make a few sections shorter it would sound a little better, but overall i liked it, note- it sounds better and better the more i hear it repeated
well, I could fill it with much more and I could also add so much awesome stuff, but I just made this because I was bored.
Anyway, thanks for the review :D.
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